[Nfd-dev] comments for the nfd doc

[Ilya Moiseenko]

Page 25
“list of the provided build-in strategies”  built-in

Page 27
“only purpose of the strategy is to decides” decide
“forwarding pipelines..” remove comma

Page 29
“in particular, users can manipulate the:” sentence is unfinished
“destruction and enable/disable” enabling/disabling

Page 39
“timestamp state for each trusted public key “ missing comma

Page 40
“remote manchines” typo
What is the access router?
“testbed site or instituion” typo
“register prefixes However” missing comma

Page 41
“regain superuser privileges in orde to” typo


Ilya



On Jun 20, 2014, at 12:14 PM, John DeHart <jdd at seas.wustl.edu> wrote:

> 
> I'm doing a quick skim and have formatting issues in the following sections
> where text runs off into the right margin. There is also perhaps text lost there.
>    2.1
>    3.6.2
>    4.2.4
>    9.1.1 (near the end)
>    9.6
>    9.8
> 
> I'll try to get back to it some more before Sunday.
> 
> John
> 
> On 6/19/14, 12:40 AM, Beichuan Zhang wrote:
>> Hi,
>> 
>> We’ve been integrating the text of the NFD Developer’s Guide, and now it is in the final stage. Can everyone read the document or part of it, and email in comments? Any comment would be appreciated. We plan to finish it by the end of Sunday.
>> 
>> The current PDF is attached. If you want the latest version, the repository is git at git.irl.cs.ucla.edu:papers/nfd-docs.git.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> Beichuan
>> 
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